tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post5576648728331974345..comments2023-12-15T08:48:28.098-05:00Comments on Once in a Blue Muse: Poetry Thursday--a guest postLisa Cohenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07530826748768737972noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-74379856194988078602007-06-04T09:04:00.000-04:002007-06-04T09:04:00.000-04:00Great poem! I was right there with the poet while ...Great poem! I was right there with the poet while reading it.<BR/>-Tom Libbyveggiefahmahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07499974175537396953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-18364392516880603422007-06-03T09:41:00.000-04:002007-06-03T09:41:00.000-04:00Thank you very much for your comments. My 2 boys ...Thank you very much for your comments. My 2 boys have been playing word games with me since they could talk (and talk back! LOL). My teenaged son writes short stories and collaborates on text-based role playing while the younger one likes it when I give him poetry challenges.<BR/><BR/>Sometimes we'll talk about a word choice for a particular place in a poem and he'll tell me a certain phrase has good alliteration. <BR/><BR/>Makes my heart soar.<BR/><BR/>:)Lisa Cohenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07530826748768737972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-73556652210839539042007-06-03T07:00:00.000-04:002007-06-03T07:00:00.000-04:00Eric could teach a class in poetry! The pace, the ...Eric could teach a class in poetry! The pace, the line breaks, the word choices, the images - first rate!Paulinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14555472024981357622noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-20838350267364731842007-06-03T01:35:00.000-04:002007-06-03T01:35:00.000-04:00Love it, Eric. Love it.Love it, Eric. Love it.Writing on Boardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03586187888418224291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-14356441990623156642007-06-02T13:52:00.000-04:002007-06-02T13:52:00.000-04:00I fully agree with the first comment above. In fac...I fully agree with the first comment above. In fact, I'm goggle-eyed right now. *mouths a WOW* (a piece free from cliches, and rich in motion; strong "shows" rather than having just "tells").<BR/><BR/>(p.s. It'd be an honor to shake your hand, Eric. ^_^ Cheers.)S.L. Corsuahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-17883457893628100512007-06-01T08:04:00.000-04:002007-06-01T08:04:00.000-04:00Thank you all! Eric was thrilled to read your com...Thank you all! Eric was thrilled to read your comments. I love working with school aged children.Lisa Cohenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07530826748768737972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-27700275322190206302007-06-01T06:07:00.000-04:002007-06-01T06:07:00.000-04:00this is very creative. You obviously facilitated a...this is very creative. You obviously facilitated a good workshop and well done to your son for his poem!Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-76117717591888201102007-06-01T00:25:00.000-04:002007-06-01T00:25:00.000-04:00VERY cool. Kudos to the poet.VERY cool. Kudos to the poet.sister AEhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17253107622268200803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13911862.post-188948322223192302007-05-31T22:44:00.000-04:002007-05-31T22:44:00.000-04:00If you hadn't said this was a 5th grader I would n...If you hadn't said this was a 5th grader I would never have guessed. What a wonderful poem with such a creative twist. I loved it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com