Sorry for the delay in posting. The winners of a private critique from the poetry tools workshop are:
Cheryl, whose comment started with "This topic is very beneficial for me. I tend to write lean in the first draft. . ."
Shannon, whose comment started with "This was great. I love how you are highlighting your posts with poetry and then showing how to translate into prose."
If you email me a scene or page (up to 250 words) from your writing, I will complete a mark up like I illustrated on day 5 of the workshop. These critiques WILL NOT be shared on the blog.
Send your scenes to ljcblue at gmail dot com.
Congrats and thank you for participating!